初中英语作文高秘诀.pptVIP

标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 …… … C. 顿号 、 无　　　 (4) 描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2) 服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3) 内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4) 感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5) 动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)要使上下文连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。　　　1) 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or … 　　　 10) 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important … 11) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, … 12) 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as … 13) 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking … 6. 书写工整，卷面整洁 　字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。 7. 写完之后，勿忘检查 (1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。 　　　 let`s see some examples My hometown, a village locating beside a small river, is a wonderful place with beautiful scenery surrounded. Because of the poor geographical environment and without an good road, the whole village is poor and people’s lives are tough. Generally, people grow rice and some other crops for a living. Most young people work at the city, leaving their parents and children at home, which is the status of the vast majority of rural area. It seems that only in this way can rural people live a better life. 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however … 3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the righ