世纪金榜高考一轮复习写作技巧点拨系列(五)完美衔接过渡,巧妙起承转合(13张)详解.ppt

写作技巧点拨系列(五) 完美衔接过渡, 巧妙起承转合;【核心点拨】 　　高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准要求“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分, 使全文结构紧凑”; 而最低档次的评分标准则标明“缺乏语句间的连接成分, 内容不连贯”。这些都提醒考生, 要想在高考有限的时间里写出能获得较高分数的书面表达, 就必须应用恰当的衔接过渡词汇来使句子、段落之间的衔接通顺自然, 达到内容连贯, 文章结构紧凑的目的。从而避免结构松散, 层次不明, 表意不清等弊端。;　　一、语句间常用的衔接过渡词汇;表强调;表时间;表列举;　　二、段落间常用的衔接过渡词汇 　　文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成, 在修辞中称为起、承、转、合。“起”就是开头, “承”是承接, “转”是转折, “合”是综合或总结。;用于“承”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第一个扩展句中);用于“转”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第二个 扩展句中);【即时应用】 下面是一篇题为“Haste makes waste(欲速则不达)”的文章, 请根据提示填写出恰当的过渡词以确保语篇连贯。 Haste makes waste 　　There is an old saying, “Haste makes waste. ”It’s the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct and of great importance in many cases even today. ; ①　　　　(表顺序)it teaches us that we shouldn’t be overanxious about quick results. ②　　　　(表转折)we will fail. ③　　　　(表递进)if we emphasize too much upon speed, we will suffer sooner or later. ④　　　　(表举例)if we are too hasty in tests, it is very possible that we may make some mistakes or even fail. ⑤　　　　(表递进)we may leave a bad impression on both the teachers and classmates that we are careless. ⑥　　　　(再次举例)if a sportsman is hasty in an important game, he may lose a very precious opportunity to win the championship. ⑦　　　　(表结果)he;will lose the confidence to pick the pieces up. Haste has many side effects. On the one hand, haste may result in wrong decision or more mistakes. ⑧　　　　(表列举)haste means a failure or an accident in some important occasion. ⑨　　　　(表总结)whatever we do, do pay attention to the balance of the speed and quality. ;答案: ①Firstly　②Otherwise　③In addition　④For example/For instance　⑤What’s more　⑥For another example ⑦As a result　⑧On the other hand　⑨In conclusion/In a word