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高分作文技巧指导 ----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法一： 适当运用高级词汇 在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 1.我对英语非常感兴趣。 I’m very interested in English. I’m quite / extremely interested in English 2. 我们的校园位于市中心。 Our school is in the center of the city. Our school is located in the center of the city Our campus situates in the center of the city 3.放学后，我们有很多作业要做。 After school, we have a lot of homework to do. After school, we have endless homework to do. 4) 我们可以得到社会及工作经验。 We can get some working and social experience We can abtain some working as well as social experience 5． 洗澡间和厨房都很好。 The bathroom and the kitchen are good. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished 6. 大部分学生认为应当学好英语。 Most of the students think it is necessary to study English The majority of the students hold the view that it is necessary to master English. 高分作文技巧指导 ----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法二： 恰当运用漂亮句型 在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。使用漂亮句型，特别是打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子会成为得分亮点。 1．My brother is a college student, and he is glad to help others. → My brother who is a college student is glad to help others. （使用定语从句） → My brother, who is a college student, is glad to help others. → My brother, a college student, is glad to help others. （使用同位语） 2. 我们应当尽力帮助他。 → We should try our best to help him → We should spare no effort to help him → We should help him as far as we can. → We should do whatever we can to help him. 实战训练： 1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much about it. （使用名词性从句） ? 2. Though he is young, he knows a lot. ? 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the? newspaper.(使用强调句型) ? 4. I passed the exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） ? 5. She entered the room and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) ? 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) ? 7. I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） ??? 8. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 9．As soon as he arrived ,he began to work. (