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Working at home is better than working in the office? Intro. Body Sp 1. 提高工作效率（。。。） Sp 2. Beneficial for the overall management of the company.. 1) 想出分论点 2) 段内如何展开？ Sp 1. 因为来新东方学习可以提升我的身体素质。 Confusion ?Why? 学习?时间规律?生活规律——-》 in such a mess 出国旅游？ 国内旅游？ Sp 1. 我去不同的国家旅游，我可以了解不同的文化。 How? 来新东方上课可以提高学习效率。 新东方?老师对考试非常熟悉?最正确的引导?避免纹路—》效率 50 principle NO.1 主体段=主题句+说理+例证+小结 请注意： 1） 说理仅仅存在于当主题句会导致阅卷者困惑的时候（not common sense） 2） 例证用于1，主题句直接是common sense 2,说理字数不够 3， 说完理还是觉得抽象 ? 1）语法正确性 （保证20分） 他是如何从超重减肥到现在的标准身材的依然是个秘密。 It’s a secret that how he lost weight from overweight to the standard figure. It is a secret how he lost weight from overweight to the standard figure. That, whether，疑问词（why, how, when, where, which…） 政府应该提倡民众保护环境。 The government should advocate protecting the environment. Advocate that citizens protect the E. 我们很容易受到名人影响。 We are easy to be influenced by celebrities. Being influenced by celebrities is easy for me. We are necessary to learn english. Doing part-time jobs earns a lot of money. 赖氏英语语法 托福进阶初级写作 ? 2）语言连贯性（23以上？） the society is developing rapidly. People have no time to entertain themselves. They are left with no time to be concerned with others. ? 3）语言强度(25以上) studying in NOS can help me to improve my score. Significantly promotes This makes/lets me confused. This baffles me. I can hardly see the large rise of my academic performance without learning here./unless I attend course here. ? 4）素材积累 Intro. It is necessary to have meals together with family members regularly. When it comes to the issue whether family members should get together for meals frequently, different people surely hold different ideas based on their divergent background, experiences, and values. As for me, the frequent meals with parents and siblings are a MUST. My idea is thus quite clear: even if sometimes I have sacrifice the working or entertaining time, still, I would like to enjoy meals with my dearest family members regularly. 利弊类题目分析 Colleges and univers