2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（十）日记类写作指导.docVIP

2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座 十 日记类写作指导 日记属于实用写作类，是日常生活中应用最广泛的写作形式之一，也是高考写作命题经常采用的题型。日记有五个方面的要求：格式、人称、时态、文体和语言。 格式 日期和星期写在左上角；右上角写出当日的天气情况。 人称 日记多描述自己经历之事或所思所想，多用第一人称I或we来叙述。 时态 日记多是晚上写下当天所发生之事，一般应用过去时态记述。 文体 日记多属记叙文的范畴。 语言 日记的语言要通俗易懂，具有生活气息。 下面我们以一个例子来探讨一下日记的写法： 今天我参加了地理小组的一个活动，去华联超级市场调查一下人们使用塑料袋的情况。 超级市场的领导热情接待了我们并带我们参观了市场.我们高兴的发现很多顾客都自带了袋子, 顾客高度赞扬这项措施改善了环境。在回来的途中我们还拍了照片，借以反映目前城市的环境状况。 September 23, 2008 Tuesday Fine Today I took part in a geography research study group.We went to ①Hualian Department to see whether plastic bags ②are still being used.The leader of the department received us warmly and showed us around .③To us joy, nearly all of the customers took bags with themselves and they said the laws on banning shoppers ④to use plastic bags are very good,because plastic bags are seldom seen in the street and⑤ we humans are living in a clean and tidy environment.On our way back,we took a lot of pictures⑥ shows the present conditions of our city. Through this research activity,I come to ⑦knowing that everyone likes our earth—the big Family of ourselves and I belive our city will become more and more beautiful. 教师点评： 这篇写作符合日记的五个特点，尤其语言符合日记的特点，朴实而自然，让人倍感亲切。文中一些短语（take part in, to our joy,take pictures,）的使用及现在分词的使用更增加文章的亮点。当然文中也还存在一些语言方面的错误，平时学习时还要扎实基础。 ①Hualian Department的前面加the。Hualian Department 是专有名词。 ②are 改成were。与went的时态一致 ③us改成our。To one‘s joy 意思为“令人高兴的事是 ” ④to use 改成from using。ban sb.from doing sth. 意思为 “禁止某人做某事” ⑤在and 的后面加that。 ⑥shows改成showing。 ⑦knowing改成e to do sth.意思为 “逐渐做某事” 参考范文： September 23, 2008 Tuesday Fine Today I took part in a geography research study group.We went to the Hualian Department to see whether plastic bags were still being used.The leader of the department Received us warmly and showed us around .To our joy, almost all of the customers took bags with themselves and they said the law on banning shoppers from using plastic bags is very good,because plastic bags are seldom seen in the street and that we humans are living in a clean and tidy