Unit 1作文讲评.pptVIP

Unit 1作文讲评 Differences in child education between Easterners and Westerners 写作的优劣主要从三方面进行判断： 内容、结构和语言 作文存在很多问题，比如内容单调、主题不明确、论点论据支持力不足；文章结构和句子结构欠合理、段落和句子间连接不顺畅；语言方面的问题，比如回避现象、中式英语、语法错误、用词错误等。究其原因主要反应在以下方面：语言基本功不扎实以及英汉两民族思维模式不同导致的问题，比如文章往往是英语的语言，但是汉语的思维，汉语的味道过于浓厚。英语写作是一个复杂的思维过程，对认知能力、思维能力、语言能力、组织能力和自我监控能力都有相当高的要求。 首先选词（word），造句（sentence），然后组段（paragraph），成文（composition）。  学会用词适当，写作选词时应该做到下列几个方面： 1、分辨语体，书面体和口语体。2、明确词性，一词多性、派生词。3、成语的运用。4、识别词义。同义词和一词多义的情况。5、注意拼写。写作时，常会出现拼写错误，大小 写和标点等问题。 其次要训练如何写出正确的句子。 五种错误： 1、词素错误，其中包括动词的时态、词型 变化、主谓是否一致以及名词的冠词、 单复数、所有格等方面的错误； 2、词汇错误，如选词、词型、用法、术语、 代词等方面的错误； 3、句法错误，如句子结构、连写句、片句 等方面的错误； 4、技术性错误，如标点符号、拼写等方面 的错误； 5、其他错误。 1.句子成分残缺不全 a. As we all known. b. They have to need to themselves’ parents. c. On the other hand, no comparable hurry to promote creativity… d. We Chinese teachers or parents always holding his hand in theirs and complish directly. 2.句子成分多余 a. In China, we are have only study style. 3.指代不一致 a. In my opinion, we should mix this two ways. b. In the eastern countries, children are taught by holding his hand. c. I think the two ideas of education all have their strong point…. 4.动词时态、语态的误用 a. In my opinion, I believed learning not only rely on hard work, but also needs exploration. b. As we all known. c. The party invitation lots of friends. 5.词类混淆 a. …, but westerners students could study happier and happier. b. In eastern, if a child made a mistake or didn’t know how to do with something… c. From my point of view, it worthwhile finding a method that make the two styles together. 6. 中式英语 a. Easterners’ parents and teachers told children everything “should” or “not”, westerners always let their children do it by their own mind. b. Our country have 5 thousand history and tradition education. c. The party invitation lots of friends. 7. 主谓不一致 a. Our country have 5 thousand history and tradition education. (参考前面) b. They is independent people. c.