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那些年，我们写作中都犯过的错 创建时间： 2015-2-3 7:04 修改时间： 2015-2-3 7:04 来源： 主语一般由名词，或者具备名词性质的短语、词语或者从句充当，而动词不可以充当主语 Giving children a comfortable home environment is parents duty. 错误。“give”是一个动词，不能充当句子的主语。改：动词名词化就行 Parents duty is to give children a comfortable home environment 正确。父母的责任是给孩子一个舒适的家庭环境。 一个完整的句子不能充当另外一个句子的主语。在这种情况下，需要将其中一个句子改成从句，或者使用形式主语“it”。 Students receive job training is important. 错误。“students receive job training”是一个句子，不能充当另外一个句子的主语。 It is important for students to receive job training. Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market. 错误。“students receive job training”是一个句子，不能充当另外一个句子的主语。 Students can become competitive in the labour market if they receive job training. 正确。学生在劳动力市场上会非常有竞争力，如果他们接受工作培训的话。 介词不是连词，一般后面只接名词或者具备名词性质的短语或者带连词的宾语从句，因此不能加句子。比较容易被当作连词的介词有despite, in spite of, during, because of,也不能加动词。 Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite they have knowledge of ill health effects. 错误。despite不是although，不是连词。 Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite their knowledge of ill health effects. 正确。很多抽烟者不愿意停止抽烟，尽管他们知道这有害健康。 Many children depend on their parents give support. 错误。on是介词，后面不能加句子。 Many children depend on their parents support. 正确。很多小孩依赖他们父母的支持。 To在某些情况下，如词组，give rise to, contribute to, pay attention to, conform to 中做介词，需要加名词或者具备名词性质的东西充当宾语,而不是加动词原形充当不定式。 Public disorder can lead to damage a country’s economy. 错误。 to是介词，后面不能加动词。 Public disorder can lead to a countrys economic crisis. 正确。社会的无秩序状态可能导致一个国家的经济灾难 There are many solutions to deal with the problem. 错误。to是介词，后面不能加动词。 There are many solutions to the problem. 副词的使用 副词或者名词短语充当状语的时候，前面不能加介词。 Students are more likely to do homework on the computer in today. 错误。today作状语的时候是一个副词，前面不能加介词。 Today, students are more likely to do homework on the computer. 正确。学生如今更有可能在电脑上做作业。 People can travel to and from duty in everyday on foot or by bike. 错误。every day作状语，前面不能加介词。 People can travel to and from duty everyday on foot or by bike. 正确。人们可以每天通过步行或者自行车上下班。