2016创新设计江苏专用高考英语二轮专题复习课件——第四部分 书面表达训练 第4课时.pptVIP

专 题 探 究 感 悟 高 考 第4课时　如何增加细节及名词性从句的运用 一、增加细节 在英语书面表达中，增加细节的描述是必不可少的，在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能只简单地翻译或完成所给条目内容，在看图作文中更不行，只有增加细节描述才能使你的作文流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。如何增加细节呢？ 方法一　列举具体的实例来补充说明 1.我喜欢体育运动。 I like sports very much. →I like sports very much，such as basketball and football. 2.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. → We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single--use products，plant more trees and save water and energy. 方法二　 添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容 1.晚饭后，这个男的走向卧室。 After supper，the man went to his bedroom. → After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作) 2.我有时去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then. → I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染 ) 3.我看到了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. → I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior.(心理) 方法三　 添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 1.Tracy 来电话留言：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。 拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。(原因) Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee. → Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee，as she has something important to attend to. 2.帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。 拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。(结果) I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. → I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me. 方法四　 结尾发挥，写你的感受、评价、愿望、倡议等 1.Although I stood all the way home，I felt very happy for what I did. 2.I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. 3.In addition，if she would like to learn Chinese，I will be happy to help her. 4.With everyones contribution，we can make our school a comfortable learning environment. 二、用好名词性从句 名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，它与定语从句一样，是写作中常用的高级表达之一，正确、恰当使用名词性从句会凸显