评分与范文材料分析.pptx

TOEFL强化写作课程 Lecturer: Roy 第二章评分标准及范文解析 2.1 思路：有效，切题 – Effective addresses the topic and task 简化 切题化 2.1 思路：有效，切题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games and sports teach people lessons about life. 同意 理由：多做运动会让人们保持健康 Games and sports show people that life is always in motion. Increasing number of people could understand the value of being healthy. 2.1 思路：有效，切题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games and sports teach people lessons about life. 同意 理由：人们通过运动会结交更多朋友 People can learn how to cooperate in playing games and sports. Teamwork spirit is highly regarded as one of the most important personalities. 2.1 思路：有效，切题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to understand truly world event, some people think news from newspaper is better than television news. 不同意 报纸和电视新闻的区别：123 Compared to news from newspaper, television news provides audiences more images and videos, where social events are presented to them in a relatively objective way. 2.2 结构：固定，充分 – Is well organized and developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details. 2.2 结构：固定，充分 文章理由需要保持平行 e.g. the advantages of the Internet 理由段内需要包括解释和例子 e.g. the impacts of human activities One of the main effects of human activity on an area is water pollution. The untreated factory waste water is detrimental to our health and surrounding environment. According to an influential report, some chemical factories dump waste water which contains various toxins into rivers, and two convincing reasons can be offered. One reason is that wastewater disposal costs much, and another root cause is that majority of merchants are lack of the awareness of significance of environmental protection. When this waste is dumped into rivers, the water downstream becomes undrinkable and usable for agriculture, and also kills plant and animal life in the rivers. 2.2 结构：固定，充分 e.g. water pollution 段落分析 (1) water pollution (2) factory