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六级作文之对比分析型 侧重正反对比论证 Do “Lucky number” really bring good luck ? 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运 我认为数字和运气无关 分析： 第一段：提出观点段：提出一些人的“数字会带来好运”的观点和“我”反对的立场。 第二段：反面论证段：阐述“数字会带来好运”观点的理由和错误之处。 第三段：正面论证段: “我”的论据论证“数字与运气无关”的观点，为正面论证段 Do “Lucky number” really bring good luck ? ①Quite a few people believe “lucky numbers” like “8” can bring them good luck. ②Even some people spare no expense to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include “8”. ③However, I hold the entirely different view. (提出观点段) ④Of course, “lucky numbers” may sound propitious and make people feel good. ⑤For example, those who believe in “lucky numbers ” may feel hopeful and confident when they think of their “lucky numbers”. ⑥But it doesn’t mean that “lucky numbers” really bring good luck. ⑦In my opinion, “lucky numbers” are only numbers, which have nothing to do with one’s luck. （反面论证段） ⑧The following reasons can account for my argument. ⑨First, no number can change the reality and make a miracle. ⑩A good example to illustrate this is a seriously injured man should be treated as soon as possible but not wait till his “lucky” date. 11Second, if lucky numbers really did work, nobody would be willing to work hard any more. 12To conclude, we should work hard to obtain a happy life instead of depending on lucky numbers. (正面论证段) 侧重利弊分析 The Pros and Cons of college students’ taking Part-time Jobs 分析大学生做兼职的利与弊 谈谈我的看法 分析： 第一段：说明好处段：分析大学生做兼职工作有哪些好处 第二段：说明坏处段：分析大学生做兼职工作带来的问题 第三段：阐述观点段：阐述“我”对大学生做兼职的看法 The Pros and Cons of college students’ taking Part-time Jobs ①Nowadays many college students take part-time jobs in their spare time. ②There is no doubt that taking a part-time job brings about several benefits to college students. ③Above all, part-time jobs provide a valuable chance to put their theoretical knowledge into practice. ④So their practical skills are improved greatly. ⑤Furthermore, students can earn some money to help lighten the burden on their families. (说明好处段) ⑥However, problems may also arise. ⑦