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第一节开头 偏离主题是写作中的大忌，也是最大的败笔。因此，文章伊始就要注意掌稳，不能偏离航道。前面谈到的审题和打腹稿就是有效避免此类错误的重要法宝。此外，掌握下列原则也是使文章主题鲜明、中心突出的可靠保障。 英国博物学家John Ray有句名言：Well begun is half done.良好的开端成功的一半。做事如此，写作又何尝不是如此？中文文章讲究的是凤头、猪肚和豹尾，强调文章的开篇要有神采，要引人人胜；结尾要有力度，能画龙睛，耐人寻味。英文文章也不例外。一篇开宗明义、立意新颖的文章，定会激发阅读者的兴奋点，使之为之一震。下面的开篇“法宝”会助你旗开得胜，马到成功。 一、开头的原则 英文式的思考方式属于垂直模式，其特点是决不拐弯抹角，有话统统和托出。这种思维模式突出地体现在英文独特的行文方式上。 1．开篇点题 例1 Topic: The iPad Opening: The iPad is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever invented. It is not only esteemed by teachers, research workers, administrators, but also by many students. 例2 Topic: The Two-day Weekend Opening: Since the carrying out of the two-day weekend, college students ave benefited a lot from it. First. . 点评：用主题句点明主题，而且one of the most welcome and popular ectronic devices和not only.. but also，．，使文章开门见山，引人人胜。 假如文章这样开头：The iPad is an electronic device ever invented．是否如同一杯白开水平淡而无味了呢？ 2．易于展开 例 1 Topic: My View on Opporturuty Opening: Different people have different opinions as to the view of opportunity. Some people argue that. 例 2 Topic: Why I Want to Go to College? Opening: There are several reasons why I want to go to college. First all,… [点评]：例1中的两个different为下文的展开提供了广阔的空间，作者此有了很大的自由度。先提出别人的观点，再表明自己的态度。可写的容实在很多，发挥的余地也很大。例2则旗帜鲜明地告诉读者：本段将以列举的方式娓娓道来。 假如两篇文章分别这样开头：My view on oppoItunity is that..；I want to get a college degree．或I want to go to college，则下文展开的空间极为有限，三两语之后便无话可说；无法在有限的篇幅内得以充分的阐述。因此，开篇的主题句既不要写得太笼统，也不能太具体。 3．吸引读者 例 1 Topic: Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports OPening: I feel there are so many benefits a person gets from participating in sports. No matter what sports you participate in, there are a lot of obvious advantages. 例2 Topic: The Two-day Weekend Opening: Many college students wait for the two-day weekend with great anticipation and excitement. They see it as a time to breathe and make use of their free time to either relax or catch up on their studies. 点评：例1不仅开篇点题，而且feel一词恰如其分地表达了作者的切，身感受。此处，它与think, believe, suppose等词之间的差别如同“闪电与莹