六课时 写作 writing外研社必修2 module 1.ppt

基础写作四重奏: 1. 信息划分 : 确定哪些相关的信息可用一句话表达，拟定自己想表达的句子。建议可在题目上用铅笔做 ①,②,③,④,⑤的标志 (完整性) 2. 列出关键词组和句型 (准确性) 3. 串联句子: 用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子, 并形成篇章 (连贯性) 4.检查(准确性) 现象：一些同学没有意识到饮食和健康的关 realize / the link between diet and good health（身体健康）/ the dining hall 饮食不科学，常吃一些含热量和脂肪过高的食 scientific/ food rich in fat and calories 后果：一些同学开始发胖，没精力学习。 not only… but (also) / energy to study 建议：大家要意识到健康饮食的重要性，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做运动。 it is important for us to … take exercise 常用词汇： However, therefore, what’ more, what’s worse, On the one hand, on the other hand 山东水浒书业有限公司· 优化方案系列丛书 语法专题突破 写作专题突破 Module 1　Our Body and Healthy Habits 山东水浒书业有限公司· 优化方案系列丛书 语法专题突破 写作专题突破 Module 1　Our Body and Healthy Habits 返回 * Do Part 1 by yourself, then check the answers with your partner. Answers to Part 1: f d b h c a g e 写作专题突破 【写作要求】 现象：一些同学没有意识到饮食和健康的关系，饮食不科学，常吃一些含热量和脂肪过高的食品。 后果：一些同学开始发胖，没精力学习。 建议：大家要意识到健康饮食的重要性，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做运动。 注意：1.要写成一篇完整的短文，不要直译； 2．100词左右。 【连句成篇】 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 Recently，when eating in the dining hall，I found that some students hadn’t realized the link between diet and good health and they didn’t eat healthy food.They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat.As a result，they often feel too weak to take their lessons energetically.So this affects not only their study but also their health. Therefore，it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the right kinds of food and eat healthily.We should have more vegetables，more fruits and less meat.Moreover，we should also take enough exercise so that we can keep our body strong.