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Pragmatic failure in discourse Inaccurate tone unclear standpoint Ungrounded ideas Unnecessary details bad conclusion Inaccurate tone In my view, college pressure has become a part of our college life. What we should do is to adapt ourselves to it. We should try our best to overcome it. Only in this way can we make our college life more colorful. Only in this way can we do sth.的句式在中国学习者习作的结尾部分经常出现，但该句式的语气过于绝对，不如说by doing sth.或干脆不用这样的句式。同时，本例中还存在前文讨论过的其他问题，如用词的冗余和句子的冗余。本例可改为In my view, college pressure has become a part of our life. What we should do is to adapt ourselves to it and finally overcome it so that we can make our college life colorful. unclear standpoint Ungrounded ideas Unnecessary details I prefer to live with roommates because roommates are very necessary. We can make friends with roommates. They will give their hands when we are in trouble. We can get proper means to solve the problem after we have a discussion. But I don’t think we should have too many roommates, six are enough, or the dorm will be too crowded and noisy. In this sense, living alone is better for we can concentrate on study and no one will disturb us. 出自胡春梅：大学英语写作中语用失误的分析研究 本段出自题为“Living Along or Living with Roommates?”的学生习作。受中式思维的影响，学生在文章中常做正反两面的讨论，自己的观点反而得不到有力的支撑。正如本例中学生即说了与室友同住的好处，也提到了室友多的不足和自己住的优点，而主题句I prefer to live with roommates because roommates are very necessary. 与后半段的内容无关。这些与主题无关的细节成了文章的包袱。 bad conclusion All in all, we college students can not get away from pressures from parents, teachers, and the society. Therefore, we need to arrange our schedule reasonably so that we can relax ourselves and build a strong mind. And relaxation is really important for us. 结尾段应总结文章要点，但我国英语学习者的习作中常会在结尾部分提出与文章主题关系不紧密甚至无关的内容，正如本例中的最后一句，颇有画蛇添足之感。 写作语篇错误分析 Redundancy in discourse Overuse of sentence patterns of CET4 writing styles Unnecessary repetition of the same idea Repetition of the same sentence patterns Redundant use of some words and phrases Chinese style of the use of verbs e