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湖南2012年高考作文以下为2012年湖南高考作文： 　　伸出是温暖的服务，摊开是放飞的想象，张大是创造的力量，捧起是收获的快乐…… 　　根据上述图文，自选角度，自定立意，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的记叙文或议论文。 　 那手，那人，那心 　　　　【评点】作者对试题写作材料的图文理解与把握准确，文章紧扣“暖暖的手”，用“送温暖”贯穿全文，中心突出，所选材料丰富、恰当，内容充实，有自己真切的认识与思考，感情真挚，内容项可在一等上限计分。文章以议论为主，符合文体要求。行文围绕中心，衔接自然，内在联系紧密，结构严谨，语言流畅，字迹工整。表达项可在一等中上限计分。发展等级可从“较丰富”、“较有文采”两个方面计分。 　　总分：内容20+表达19+发展19=58分 一只手上的中国 　　【评点】本文有多个表达意向，观点有些模糊，游移不定，但大体是论证“用双手实现梦想”这一观点，符合题意；中心介于“明确”与“基本明确”之间，内容单薄，感情真实，“内容”项在二等低档计12分；符合文体要求，结构完整，语言通顺，表达项在二档上限计15分。发展等级分可在“用词”和“句式”“达到要求”方面计12分，错别字扣1分。 　　总分12+15+12-1=38分。 己手中”这样的语句，但不影响我们做出“偏离题意”的判断。 父亲的手 manufacturers of technical documents on the quality requirements applicable to this project. Construction quality inspection and evaluation standards issued by the national power company of the electric power construction standard for quality inspection and assessment of the 11 articles assessment inspection standards as well as other relevant regulations issued by the Ministry of electric power, the State power company executive. Does not verify in the specification within the evaluation criteria, implementation design, manufacturer or ... Or issue a new national standards and regulations, bidders shall comply with new norms and standards. If there are conflicts or is inconsistent, whichever is the higher standards. 3.3 3.3.1 project of responsibility, authority and communication organization and project managers, at all levels of responsibility and authority see section II of chapter III of the present tender site management organization and part of workforce planning. 3.3.2 according ISO 9001, GB/T 50430 and company quality distribution of the quality manual, combining the departments of projects, project quality function distribution allocation table on the following page of the projects quality functions shown below. 3.3.3 project with each Department interface, interface between the internal departments of the project by project managers at all levels and the quality regulations of the responsibilit