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作文高分特点 外表美 结构美 合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰 每一段落要有一个主题句topic sentence和几个支撑句supporting sentences 写人状物及叙事记叙文先写主题句，给予总体评价，然后详细介绍事件发生的人物，时间，原因结果等，最后照应全文，构成总分总结构。 议论文一般分三段：主题段提出问题或论点；发展段围绕主题讨论，举例或讲明道理；结尾得出结论。 词汇美 两点词汇不等于偏难怪的词，而是使用生动，具体，形象的词汇，关键是地道准确。 The job is very difficult to do. The job is very challenging. Seeing the lines of trees, we all felt happy. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. 句式美 句式单一，缺乏生气，哪怕无任何错误也难得高分。精彩句式的合理使用，会使本来结构单一语句乏味的句子极富可读性。 单句变并列句/复杂句：紧凑，多变，灵活 省略与替代：避免不必要的重复和累赘 主动和被动交替：丰富句子多样性 分词及with结构：灵活，形象，紧凑 Only in this way can we live a healthy life. How time flies! It has been 10 years since we last saw each other. We will meet at the gate of our school, where a blue bus will be waiting. As the saying goes, ‘Actions speak louder than words.’ With the bright moon high up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes. 衔接美：增强句子间逻辑性和紧凑性 There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible,  First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.  In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day. 在我们队里有30名成员。 Our team consists of/is composed/made up of 30 members. 我们很容易找到了村庄。 We had no difficulty/trouble (in) finding the village. 这次英语演讲比赛非常成功。 The English speech contest was of great success. 众所周知，好的学习习惯对于学习非常重要。 As is known to all, good learning habit is of vital importance to study. 我想到了一个主意。 A good idea occurred/struck to me. 我坚持写了一年的日记，最后发现对我帮助很大。 I have kept writing diaries for a whole year, which turn out to be of