高三英语一轮复习 作文课件 人教版.pptVIP

* 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 语言地道，规范 a composition topic sentence （主题句） supporting sentences （扩展句） ending （结尾句 ） 过渡词：first, second, finally , and, besides, also, but, however, what’s more… Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. 一 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首. The boy is very hungry and he hurried home. Hungry, the boy hurried home. The boy, hungry, hurried home. 二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换) A. 合并为简单句 把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper. He went out to have a walk then. Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk. 二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换) 2. 把其中一句改为介词短语 He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back. He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并为复合句 The Chinese artists were to perform here that night. The news cheered everyone of us. The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us. 2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant… C. 把复合句改为简单句 1. 把从句改为分词短语 She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job. 2.把从句改为介词短语 I insisted that he should go. I insisted on him going. 三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构： 倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语 With 复合结构 Though he is wealthy, he works hard. Wealthy as he is, he works hard. In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard. He didn’t get up until 7 o’clock. It was not until 7 o’clock that he got up. Not until 7 o’clock did he get up. I had a good idea. A good idea