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论述文教学要旨：篇章结构 论述文一开头往往不直接点出中心论题（thesis），而是写了一个有趣味的引子（hook或者叫lead-in）。 Hook的功能是抓住读者的注意力，给读者一个清新活泼的第一印象，从而自然地导入中心论题。 另一个要介绍的要素位于文章的结尾。读者读完结尾段开头重申全文论题的话之后，心里可能想，这篇论述究竟有什么意义呢？能从中得到什么启示呢？用英语问就是“So what?” 所以文章结尾要提点建议，或是说点风趣的话，好像是在回答读者心中正想着的问题。这个全文的收尾结构就可叫做so- what。 下面是一个英语专业八级考试的题目：One major problem in the process of urbanization 在我院2001级，本任务是作为期中考试施行的。学生不能查词典。学生都能按时交卷。其中分数最高的一篇曾印发给每个学生，同时印发老师的书面讲评，旨在帮助学生看清努力方向，巩固刚学过的主题展开等技巧。这篇作文和老师讲评都附在下面。 Student works One Major Problem in the Process of Urbanization 01级 游颖君 Nowadays with the development of economy, existing cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing like mushrooms after rain. Meanwhile, urbanization brings us some problems, such as noises, pollution etc. To our great joy, these situations are being bettered under the hard work of the government and society. But I notice one of the problems that also results from urbanization is getting more and more serious, which is the relationship between people. As we all know, people can’t live without mutual communication. But it seems that the process of urbanization obstructs people’s contact. I want to emphasize the problem in three aspects. First, perfect urban life makes people become estranged from each other. With the development of economy, citizens are becoming richer and richer. They certainly want to enjoy a more comfortable life. Take housing choices for example. When people choose a house, they not only want one with pleasant rooms, but also want one with a good view and good facilities. Then the estate agencies provide with lots of such kind of houses located in different communities, which are well-decorated and isolated. As a result, more and more people prefer staying in their nice homes to setting up a good relationship with their neighbors. We often hear that A’s home was visited by thieves, and his neighbor B heard the sound but didn’t dial to the police, as B thought it was none of his business. Second, convenient facilities separate people, t