6级模拟试题一点评.doc

模拟试题一答案解析 Part I Writing 【审 题】分析标题和提纲可知，应写一篇说明文或议论文，或说明议论相结合。在结构上，根据提纲分三段行文。首段只需简述低碳生活成为流行这一现象，重点应放在第二、三段上。第三段论述大学生该怎么做时，应具体详细。 【思路一】第一段：指出低碳生活成为流行这一现象，并阐述其表现； 第二段：指出低碳生活的概念，即节电、节气和回收利用； 第三段：分三点指出大学生对此应做出的行动。 【范文一】 Low-Carbon Lifestyle (1) Ever since the World Climate Conference was held in Copenhagen, the term “low-carbon lifestyle” has become a buzzword in our daily life. (2) Everyone, old or young, is talking about it and exerting himself to achieve the low-carbon goal. Even (2) the famous stars are exerting their great influence on the common goal of low-carbon lifestyle. (3) What on earth is low-carbon lifestyle? Low-carbon lifestyle means to lower the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, by reducing the energy we use in our daily life. For common people like us, this is an attitude rather than a capacity. Low-carbon lifestyle (4) calls for the active participation of all the people in the process of saving electricity and gas, as well as recycling the useful materials. As college students, we should contribute to the revolution of low-carbon lifestyle by all means. (5) Firstly, we should avoid using disposable cutlery to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. (5) Secondly, taking public transport means or walking rather than taking a taxi when traveling is another effective way. (5) Last but not least, both the earth and we will benefit a lot if we eat green food instead of junk food or meat. 【点 评】 (1) 开门见山指出低碳生活成为一种流行 (2) 分两点说明其表现 (3) 以问句来引起第二段的概念解释 (4) “号召…积极参与” (5) 分三点说明，层次分明 【思路二】第一段：从三个方面说明现在低碳生活成为一种流行。 第二段：介绍什么是低碳生活及其内涵。 第三段：举例说明作为大学生的我应该如何去做。 【范文二】 Low-carbon Lifestyle (1) Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon to hear people talk about low-carbon lifestyle. (1) At the same time, We can often see these words on various media. (1) Besides, many related activities are organized to call people to put it into practice. (2) Then what is a low-carbon lifestyle? (3) It refers to