炼句技巧.ppt

炼句技巧（之一） * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Labor: to move with difficulty and effort 困难吃力地行进 Drag: to pull sb/sth along with effort and difficulty （使劲吃力地）拖，拉 * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 天气寒冷，皮肤变得粗糙。 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate English learners in China: The skin became rough due to the cold weather. The better translation through head-resetting: Cold weather roughens your skin. The new head is: Roughen （Oxford） 他们只是靠重兵取胜。 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate English learners in China: They won only by numerous soldiers. The better translation through head-resetting: Sheer weight of numbers secured them the victory. The new head is: secure (Oxford) 资金短缺会使我们的计划落空 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate English learners in China: Our plan may fail because of this lack of money. The better translation through head-resetting: This lack of money could sink our plans. The new head is : Sink (朗文) 这个计划神秘莫测 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate English learners in China: The plan is mysterious. The better translation through head-resetting: A shroud of secrecy surrounds the plan. The new head is : Surround （朗文） * * Label: to describe sb/sth in a particular way, especially unfairly Call: to give sb/sth a particular name; to use a particular name or title when you are talking to sb * * * * * * * Rate: to have or think that sb/sth has a particular level of quality, value, etc Consider: to think of sb/sth in a particular way * Reek: to smell very strongly of sth unpleasant Smell: to have an unpleasant smell * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 下半场这支队再次领先。 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate English learners in China: The team took its lead again in the second half. The better translation through head-resetting: The team recovered its lead in the second half. The new head is: Recover （Oxford） 这份报告值得仔细阅读。 The L1-influenced translation by intermediate Engl