十個寫作格式手稿原則.ppt

您會如何修改此文句 ? Companies see big results in cutting air pollution. 較佳： Companies witness significant progress in alleviating air pollution. ( 8.) Avoid excessively long sentence 一個句子只表達一或二個主要意思，可以避免句子太長的毛病。 以下三個方法可使繁長句子變得簡單易懂:(a) 將一句分為二句，意即第子句（結果）＋第二子句（位置、條件、目的、結果表示等特定的範圍），(b) 在句子中間使用分號以區分句子中的二個重點意思使其更清楚(c) 儘量在一個句子中只表達一個意思。 您會如何修改此文句 ? Through numerous discussions by representatives from industry, government, academic and research organizations, the Inspection Table for the Standard of Good Manufacturing Practice on Pharmaceuticals suitable to local condition as well as acceptable to international standards was drafted in July 1996. 較佳： Through numerous discussions by representatives from industry, government, academic and research organizations, the Inspection Table for the Standard of Good Manufacturing Practice on Pharmaceuticals was drafted in July 1995. The document was deemed appropriate (adequate) for local conditions as well as acceptable to international standards. 您會如何修改此文句 ? Since the climate of Orchid Island is relatively hot and humid compared to Taiwan, the research team from the research Institute decided to return them to their native habitat on Orchid Island to allow the butterflies to be successfully born. 較佳： The climate of Orchid Island is hotter and more humid than that of Taiwan, accounting for why the team from the research Institute decided to return the butterflies to their native habitat on Orchid Island for their successful birth. ( 9. ) Avoid overuse of First person 在科技文章中，一般而言使用第二人稱較用第一人稱為佳。 理由: (a )研究內容理當客觀的，過度使用第一人稱會讓讀者有內容主觀及具有成見感覺， (b) 通常有將最重要和強調的部份擺在句首的傾向。 論文中應儘量使用第三人稱來表達。在論文中使用第三人稱除了可以在表達意見的同時獲致客觀性外，也可使句子中擬欲強調的部份可以將之置於句首。 您會如何修改此文句 ? We must emphasize the development and introduction of technologies that are both environmentally friendly and able to satisfy the needs of humankind. 較佳： Developing and introducing technologies that are both environmentally friendly and able to satisfy the needs of humankind must be emphasized. 您會如何