2015高考英语作文课件.ppt

一、审题 1、结构合理，主题鲜明 2、理解题意、抓住中心 3、掌握要领、判断文体 二、组织 1、Head ①开门见山，揭示主题 ②回忆性开头 eg: I remember my first trip to… ③介绍环境式开头 eg: It was a rainy and windy morning… ④以交代写作目的来开头 eg: In this article I shall… 2、Body 3、End ①首尾呼应，画龙点睛 ②重复主题句 ③自然结尾 ④用反问句结尾 ⑤指明方向，激励读者 三、修饰——实质性语言加工阶段 1、多使用较复杂句子结构或较高级的词汇 如：定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、倒装及强调句型、with的复合结构、非谓语动词等 Eg: ① His English is very good. → He has a good knowledge of English. His English is wonderful. ② My uncle lives in a room and its window faces the south. → My uncle lives in a room whose window faces the south. My uncle lives in a room with the window facing the south. ③ If time permits, we can stay here longer. → Time permitting, we can stay here longer. 虚假广告太多，会坑害消费者。 There are some false advertisements that cheat people into buying their things. 虚假广告占用报刊太多的版面，浪费纸张。 False advertisements cover too much space in newspapers, which waste a lot of paper. 虚假广告占用电视、广播太多的时间。 False advertisements take up too much time on TV and the radio. 2、有效的使用连接词，化零散为连贯 ①举例 for example、such as… and so on 、 namely、 first…second …finally…、take … as an example…、that is ②总结归纳、发表意见 in a word、in short、 in one’s opinion、 personally、to one’s surprise 、 consequently 、 as a result 、 in other words、 accordingly 、chiefly ③句与句之间的连贯 what’s more、 besides、 and、 then 、 so---- that 、 in addition 、 furthermore 、 without doubt 、 as a matter of fact 、in fact ④转折 however、 while、on the other hand 、 on the contrary 、 nevertheless 、 yet ⑤因果 therefore、 thus、 as a result、 so 3、避免重复啰嗦 四、检查——书面表达最后一道工序 1、主谓是否一致? 2、时态是否混乱 3、拼写是否有错 4、标点大写是否正确 5、用词是否得当 6、句子成份是否完整 7、信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏 8、书写规范，卷面整洁 假如你是高中三年级的学生张明，随着广告业的发展，广告已与我们的生活息息相关。但是广告是利是弊？请根据下列两组讨论意见，用英语写一篇文章，并简要说明自己的看法。 注意：1 对所给要点，不要简单翻译，可适当发挥； 2 字数100-150。短文中开头已写好，不计入词数。 With the development of advertising, ads have been connected with people’s life. Is it good