第五讲：提高英语写作的技巧.pptVIP

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008  Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. …………. Bad sample 字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had taken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ’ll show you around my hometown when you are on leave. Best wishes,  Li Hua  Five steps for writing (写作五步骤） 常用的连接词 1表示递进 2表示转折 3表示因果 4表示条件 5表示时间 6表示特定的顺序 7换一种方法表述 进行举例说明 8总而言之，总的来说 9其他 用所给的词完成下面短文 finally, then, at first, after that ? ? I had a bad cold last week. __________, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. ________I began to cough. ________, I had a fever and felt weak. ___________, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. Sing the songs together（Pay attention to the songlines in red) In younger days I’ve told myself my life would be my own,and I’ll leave this place where sunshine never shone ,for my life is too short for waiting when I see the rising sun and I know again that I must carry on. 在年轻的日子里，我告诉自己 我将有属于自己的生活 而且我要离开这阳光照不到的地方 我的生命没有时间等待 当我看见升起的太阳那时它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去 坚持到明天，那是没有理由再回想 坚持到明天…… 在远处云层的黑影前进到天空 让它坚持到我找到彩虹的尽头 我的生命没有时间等待 当我看见升起的太阳那时它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去  Thank you for your listening Writing * 重点：学习些技巧来提高自己的写作水平 难点：掌握技巧并能够应用到日常写作中 I this morning eat breakfast. Have?you?eat?meal?? Im a larger school student. Im very like play basketball. We should hard study. But I better like listen music. Live to old, study to old. I had breakfast this morning. Good morning/afternoon/evening! I’m a college student. We must work/ study hard. It’s never too old to learn. But I like listening to