高考英语写作专项训练十九.pptVIP

One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded. Suppose you are Li Hua and Wang Ping please tell us what you did with the bird. 审语境： 审人称： 审时态： 抓关键词： 一个星期六的下午，李华和王平在树林里玩。他们在地上发现一只受伤的小鸟。 supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping We Please tell us what you did with the bird. 过去时 What you did 巧妙构思： Took it home Took it to the hospital Buried it when it was dead 展开细节 + 恰当的语言表达 语言应地道、规范、得体。 范文 Thinking that it might die without treatment, we took it home. I made a little nest for it and gave it some rice to eat. Some days later, the bird recovered. We took it out and let it return to the woods. I thought we had done so good a thing. We put the bird in my hat and took it to the animal hospital. The doctor said one of its wings was hurt. He gave us some medicine and told us to put it on the wound once a day. We took the bird home and took good care of it. A few days later, the bird could fly again. 3. We tried to save the bird by giving it some water and food. And then we decided to take it to the animal hospital, but it was too late. After a short while, the bird couldn’t move at all and it was dead. So we dug a small hole and put the bird into it as a bomb. What a pity. 问题范文 First find the wound of the bird quickly. Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot. Then put some medicine on it and tie a hand around the wound. 时态问题 2. First we are looking at the bird carefully in order to know where the bird has wounded. Then we treated the bird carefully and decided to take the bird to a hospital, where it could have a better medical care. After that, when the bird is getting better, we let it free. 3. One day in the afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran to the other side of the road. I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it wa