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Directions ????For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Rural Workers: A Mixed Blessing for the City.?You should write no less than 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:?? 1.九十年代以来，大批民工流入发达城市?? 2.民工对城市的建设所作的贡献?? 3.民工的大量流入可能带来的问题?? 范 ????文 ??The early 90s finds an unprecedented tide of rural workers flooding into big cities such as Shanghai, Guangzhou, and Beijing.?According to a recent survey, in Shanghai alone there are more than 2.5 million migrant workers.?? ??There is an ambivalent feeling towards rural workers.?No one denies the important contribution rural workers have made to the urban development.?They have done most of dirty, dangerous and underpaid jobs in heavy industries, construction sites and other fields that city residents are unwilling to enter.?They have become an indispensable part of urban life to a point where the machinery of a city cannot operate without those cogs, though small and unnoticed.?Yet an anti-migrant attitude runs consistently through the mainstream of urban consciousness.?City residents complain that migrant workers have worsened traffic and sanitation problems and have threatened to take already scarce urban jobs.?They also blame them for the sharp rise in the urban crime rate.?? ??Despite the problems posed by migrants, one thing is certain: a grand, prosperous edifice of the city is based on the work of millions of migrant workers.?? 讲????评 ??自90年代初以来，大批民工涌进了沿海大城市。如何看待民工问题？毫无疑问，城市居民的心情是复杂的。作者就是从这个角度来剖析城市居民的心态。文章第一段，作者首先运用形象化的语言和具体的数据来描绘民工这一社会现象，为说明问题向读者提供必要的背景知识。然后，作者在第二段一开始，提出全文要讨论的中心论点：There is an ambivalent feeling towards rural workers。既然对民工的看法是喜忧参半，作者就从两个方面来分析。首先用S⑷主题句引出“喜”的看法：民工对城市的建设和经济的繁荣作出了巨大的贡献，他们活跃在建筑工地、重工业、运输业等，干着城市人愿干的最危险、最肮脏和最重的活。然后作者以S⑺Yet an anti-migrant attitude runs consistently through the mainstream of urban consciousness这个过渡转折句兼另一方面的主题句，引出“忧”的看法：民工大量流入城市对城市交通、住房、卫生、就业，尤其是社会治安，造成了巨大的压力。最后一段的总结只有一句话，但从作者对内容的主从句安排，即把问题—