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英语四级六级作文训练营Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost. 原句：I did not consider that factor carefully. 改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration. 【讲解】在这个简单句中，主要做了两个改变，一是把did not改成fail to, 同样的意思，可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。 二是把consider…carefully改成了take sth into careful consideration，在考场作文中，词组的运用是个亮点，而且英语中静态居多（名词用的多），汉语中动态居多（动词用的多），在此把动词consider变成名词consideration，顿时使英文更加地道。 下面请修改以下语句： 1.With the development of society, people pay more and more attention to the quality of life. 2.They live a happier life. They take part in all kinds of social activities and have more holidays. 答案：1.With the advancement of society, more attention has been paid to the quality of life.2.They live a happier life,participating in social activities of all conceivable kinds and enjoying more holidays. 二．分词做插入语的效果例句：You are enthusiastic and enterprising. And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department. You have already won 2 awards for good academic results. 改句：You, enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our department,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results. 解析：我们可以看到例句中有3个简单句，咋看上去给人一种啰嗦、累赘的感觉。但细看之下，不难发现3个句子的主语全部是you，因此我们就该联想到同位语、插入语的应用。从改句中，我们可以发现谓语从原来的3个变成了1个，顿时使句子显得高级，精简很多。其次，还有一个改动之处为good，这个词是常用词，口语中用的更频繁些，我们可以想一些同义词例如excellent，outstanding等等。 下面请大家试试看吧！1.He depended on his familiess support to find a good job. One of his friends looked downed on him. 答案：Depending on his familiess support, he found a decent a job, which was despised by one of his friends. 副词的应用以及搭配问题例句：In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to learn knowledge well. Because in this modern world, knowledge is everything. 改句：In order to live a happy(wonderful) life, it is becoming increasing