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要点分析 1、引出主题。 When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter? 2、原因。Reasons: 3、建议。Suggestions:　 Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before. 原因：1. 缺少运动 Because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework, Because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. 原因： 2. 饮食结构不合理 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. 建议：1. 多参加体育锻炼 建议：2. 多吃健康食品， 远离垃圾食品 As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food. 建议：3.制定合理的计划， 时间表 Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies 合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. For one thing , because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. For another , because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. On the other hand, /aroused /On the one hand, In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also