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高考作为教育的 篇一：高考作文范文 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 命题分析： 本题旨在考查考生的英语写作能力，评价其能否明确写作任务，运用语言知识，达成特定的交际目标。测评时考查学生主旨是否切题，内容是否完整，表达是否准确，语言是否得体，行文是否连贯，逻辑是否清晰。考生写作词数限定为100词左右。 试题分析 本题要求考生给外教写信，请她修改申请书和简历的文字和格式。属于求助类信件。没有给要点提示，考生容易审题失误，出现跑题。要点应包括：我是谁；向你求助；为什么求助；求助内容；表达感谢。时态应为现在时。在抓住要点的基础上，行文力求准确流畅，得体连贯，层次分明。 Dear Ms Jenkins, I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I?m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I?ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I?d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don?t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I?m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. Yours, Li Hua 备考建议 近几年的书面表达通常为应用文体为主的半开放式作文。既划定了大范围，又留给了学生一定的发挥空间。备考训练中首先要培养学生审题能力，不可跑题。然后训练学生列足要点，不可遗漏，同时结合实际，在必要时添加合理细节，使内容充实连贯。在此基础上，再关注句子表达正确性的训练，条件具备的时候逐步过渡到高级结构的运用。还要关注语篇衔接成分及语气表达的得体。文章恰当结尾的训练亦不可忽视。 篇二：2016高考作文万能开头 1 一、高中语文作文万能开头VS“万能引题” 1、是什么，来得悄无生息，走得不留痕迹，却激起所有色彩的轻舞飞扬？是什么，走得不留痕迹，来得悄无声息，却留下穿越一季的倾情歌唱？是什么，轻轻地来了，又轻轻地走了，在收获的季节留下飘垂的金黄？ 是什么，悄悄地走了，又轻轻地来了，为沉寂的大