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Ⅰ 下面两幅画是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内容。(字数：120左右) I left China for the USA before the People’s Republic of China was founded（第一段第一句承担引导全文与首段的两项职能，交代人物身份）. In the old days, women were looked down upon（被歧视）. They had to stay at home, taking care of their kids, doing laundry（洗衣服）and cooking meals. By contrast（平行对照，强调重心在后半程）, women’s social status（社会地位）has been raised greatly nowadays. They enjoy equal opportunity （享受平等的权利）to attend school to even receive higher education. Not only are they good mothers and wives at home, but also they can go out of their homes to do whatever jobs in which they are interested, such as doctors, professors（教授） and even political leaders（政治领袖）. They have made great achievements in every field and contributed greatly to the development of the society. What a great change it is! Ⅱ 美国中学生eff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给eff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1．信的开头已为你写好；2．词数不少于60。ear Jeff, Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing middle school. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing. During your stay here（与文章所写的开头进行有效呼应）, we will provide you with a room of your own with a desk, a bed, a couple of chairs, a TV set as well as a separate bathroom. Our school is pretty close，with only 10 minutes’ ride from home by bike. We may have lunch at campus dining hall, where you will have a chance to enjoy a variety of delicious Chinese food and pleasant conversations with native students. After classes are over in the afternoon, you will have yourself fully relaxed, playing ball games, swimming and taking part in club activities（动作主次关系的区分）. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to offer you an enjoyable experience. Best wishes, Li Hua 可能存在的缺点： 衔接性、连贯性不够——图片间的过渡； 用词欠准确—— table（会议用桌，餐桌）/desk（书桌） problem（需要解决的问题）/question（需要回答的问题） 句子整合不够，稍显啰嗦； 语言结构简单而单一——单一的主谓宾结构、主系表结构； 重点不够突出——四幅图片在字数上应有所偏重——根据合理的生活逻辑可得，图三、图四内容应超过图一、图二； 缺乏合理的想象和补充——为内容、结构服务。