雅思写作 动图 柱图+表图.pptVIP

写作讲评之改错 动词缺失 From 1912 to 2001, the number of female far more than the number of male. 主语不当 From 1977 to 2000 saw significantly increase from 1372 to 21672 in the number of female. 介词 Male and female arrived at a peak at 2001. 各种混乱的错误 There was a massive reduce in the number of Britain female living above the age of 100, which drop by above one second from 2716 in 1935 to 1372 in 1977. There was a massive growth in the number of male, which increase by about six times. There was a surge go up, in 1977 with 8127, and 12936 in 2001. Although the total from 417 to 21672, the number of male grew f