中指作文陈霞.ppt

中考指导用书作文突破全攻略  Standards of Grading2006年南京市中考书面表达评分标准 第五档: (9-10分)能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有 少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。 第四档: (7-8分)能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误 (句子结构或动词时态错误1-2处)，但行文基 本流畅，表达基本清楚。 第三档: (5-6分)写明一些要点，语言错误较多(句子结 构或动词时态错误3-4处)，但意思基本连贯, 表达基本清楚。 第二档: (3-4分)能写出少数要点，语言错误多，意思 不连贯，影响意思表达。 第一档: (0-2分) 只能写出若干单词，无可读句子。 中考作文对考生要求(requirements)： 1、内容要完整 （写明要点） 2、没有语法错误 3、语句流畅 4、书写规范 注意点： 1、整体结构*(审题) 2、列出提纲 3、要点全面 4、语言准确性 (语法错误/ 经典语句 或短语) 5、行文流畅 (过渡语言) 6、书写规范 Dear Mr. Wu, 要点一 要点二 要点三 你的想法 Your sincerely Sam 提纲 What do you want to do or who do you want to offer help to? Volunteer Day is coming in our school. My friends and I want to do something meaningful to help poor children in the west. Why do you want to offer help? We live a happy life but some children in the west of our country don’t. Some families there are so poor that they do not have enough money for their children to go to school or go to hospital when they are sick. What can you do? We hope to raise some money to help them. We can also bring our old books, clothes or toys to sell that day. And all the money we get will be sent to the poor children. Dear Mr. Wu, Volunteer Day is coming in our school. My friends and I want to do something meaningful to help poor children in the west. We live a happy life but some children in the west of our country don’t. Some families there are so poor that they do not have enough money for their children to go to school or go to hospital when they are sick. We hope to raise some money to help them. We can also bring our old books, clothes or toys to sell that day. And all the money we get will be sent to the poor children. We will be happy for helping people in need.(想法) Your sincerely Sam My school My school Our school is large and beautiful. We love our school very much. We get up at six every morning, and then we do morning exercises. We have breakfast at seven. After that we have four lessons in the morning. We have lunch at twelve. We s