写作与讲评.pptVIP

When they are chatting, they don’t care their writing. When chatting, they don’t care their writing. Every day, they have much homework. They can’t remember the characters. They have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters. * 高三复习写作讲评课 Assessment practice of Writing 瑞安中学 宋丽珍 根据专家意见，已稍作改动。 其中 “paragraphs”改为 “parts” ， “linking words”步骤放在 “language”部分的第一步。 2008年全国高考考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容） … … 你的建议 有助于学生重视母语; 有助于学生提高母语水平; 新规定的影响 错别字普遍（电脑普及；作业量大） 问题及分析 homework revision The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they don’t care about their writting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They can’t remember the characters. To deal with the situation, the government has carried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. It’s high time that we took action. We don’t have much time. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first. How do you grade it（定档）? And why? homework show Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）? If yes, underline them. Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）? If yes, underline them. Are there any mistakes? If yes, correct them. Language Is everything to the point(切题)? Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details. content Does each part have a topic sentence? If not, come up with one. Is the article divided into parts? structure ASSESSMENT Let’s improve it: Does each part have a topic sentence? If not, come up with one. Is the article divided into parts? structure ASSESSMENT Let’s improve it: Is everything to the point(切题)? Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details. content Let’s improve it: Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）? If yes, underline the