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四六级作文典型例文精彩点评 （一） 作文题目： “Women in the Modern World” 提纲： 1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.____________ 2. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. ___________________ 3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.___________________________ 例1． （2分段） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Long age, women only did something in the kitchen or at home. Now many of them have serious jobs to serve for people. What men can do so can women