书面表达讲评与指导.ppt

我学到的写作技巧 NO.5 准确使用_______ _____作状语 非谓语 动词 Dear Annie, Near my home is a factory, which often pours its waste into the river . This causes unsafe drinking water. It gives out poisonous gases, which has a bad effect on the people’s health. Seeing these, I can’t put up with what they do. I want to ask them to cut back on the production. I also want to stop them from giving out waste water and poisonous gases. Dear Annie, Near my home is a factory, which often pours its waste into the river. This causes unsafe drinking water. It gives out poisonous gases, which has a bad effect on the people’s health. Seeing these, I can’t put up with what they do. My suggestion is that they should cut back on the production. I also want to stop them from giving out waste water and poisonous gases. Dear Annie, Near my home is a factory, which often pours its waste into the river . This causes unsafe drinking water. It gives out poisonous gases, which has a bad effect on the people’s health. Seeing these, I can’t put up with what they do. My suggestion is that they should cut back on the production. They must be prohibited（禁止） from giving out waste water and poisonous gases. * 书面表达练习讲评 暨写作技巧指导 What makes a good composition? 5分 6分 21分 21分 What makes a good composition? 1. Good handwriting 假设你是李华，你写信给Annie寻求帮助，具体内容如下： 你家附近有一家工厂，经常倾倒垃圾到河里，污染水资源，导致饮用水不安全；还排放有毒气体，影响人们健康。 你想叫他们停止排放污水和有毒气体，但是因为你父亲是该公司的经理，这样做会使他失去工作。他已经向当地人道歉并且赔款，你想原谅他，但是你又认为父亲工厂排污做得不对。你该怎么办。 请以此为内容写一封英文求助信，字数80-100字。 Is the following a good passage? Dear Annie, There is a factory near my home. It often pours the waste into the river. This causes unsafe drinking water. It gives out poisonous gases. It has a bad effect on the people’s health. I can’t stand seeing this. I want to ask them to cut back on the production. I also want to stop them from giving out waste water and poisonous gases. However, my father is the manager of the factory. This