九年级英语新目标书面表达复习课课件.ppt

How to make a good sentence 一、采用句型转换 A、把简单句结合为简单句型 例如，用并列连词 ①He is a teacher.She is also a teacher. ②Not only he but also she is a teacher. . 用状语从句结合 ①I got up so early.I caught the early bus. ②I got up so early that I caught the early bus. 二、采用变换句式 ⒈用It作形式主语 ①To learn English well is important. ② It is important to learn English well. ⒉用倒装句 ①I can achieve my dream only then. ②Only then can I achieve my dream. 三、采用固定短语 1. He likes playing football. 2. He is interested in playing football. Yesterday, Tony and Anna were on their way home. They talked happily. An old woman walked in front of them. She carried a basket of apples. Suddenly, the old woman fell down and the apples ran everywhere. Tony helped her to stand up and Anna picked the apples up. Then Anna helped the old woman carry the apples and they helped her to go home The old woman was very thankful. How happy they were ！ BA Welcome to our class! 学习如农耕 我们如农夫 一份耕耘，一分收获 If you plant a good seed in spring, you will have a good harvest in autumn. Step 1: 审。仔细读题,明确写作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求。具体做法：用笔勾画或写下以上要点 。 Step2:列。列出写作提纲，不要遗漏要点。具体做法：根据内容用要点词汇和恰当句型整理写作要点。 Step3:连。运用正确人称及关联词句连句成文，力求层次清晰，衔接自然 Step4:查。通读短文，检查订正。 How to write a good article ? Yesterday, Tony and Anna were on their way home.… Tony and Anna talked happily. An old woman walked in front of them. She carried a basket of apples. talk … walk … carry… … (yesterday) Key words: Key words: fall down… run everywhere She fell down and the apples ran everywhere. Key words: pick up… help… stand up Tony helped her to stand up and Anna picked up the apples. Key words: help …carry go home say Anna helped the old woman carry the apples. They helped her to go home. The old woman said, “Thanks a lot.” We need an outline(提纲): talk …happily , walk, carry fall down, run everywhere 3. help...stand up, pick up 4. help…carry go home 邮递员的一天 根据汉语提示，记叙一个邮递员 Mr. Smith的一天： 7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸 8:15 跟家人告别