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Para 2 body (具体细节) １、构思: 　时间 : last week / last month /yesterday / 人物: A、Ｂ、Ｃ and I …(列举时我 “I ”要放最后) 事件:travelled to Chengdu 方式 : by train Last week my parents and I travelled to Chengdu by train 。 2.具体内容(按时间或空间顺序写) On the first day : we went to….. ; on the second day : we went to ….. on the third day: we went to 去某地旅行,都用go to (went to)显得太单调 变换一下句式: 去某地: visit (visited) travel to (travelled to) go to visit (went to visited) pay a visit to (paid a visit to) tour (toured) 旅行方式by train /by air /by sea/go to….on foot Para 2 body (具体细节) 词句推敲 去各旅游景点的收获:(即去目的是做/看什么的?) 1.接近大自然 :get close to nature 2.欣赏美景 : enjoy the beautiful sights /scenery 3.对名人表达尊敬 :show our respect for sb 4.学习某地的历史：learn the history of some places 5.做某事很快乐have fun/ a great time doing sth . 形成段落 para2 Last week my parents and I travelled to Cheng -du by train . After we got off the train , we went to Mount Qingcheng , where we got close to nature and enjoyed the beautiful sights . The next day ,we visited Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage to show our respect for the poet who really cared about the poor . On the third day , we toured Dujianyan, which has existed for thousands of years (which has a long history of thousands of years ) Para 3 总结感想和感受 All in all , we had a great fun going sightseeing in Chengdu . I hope you can visit it (pay a visit to it )next time you come to China .It is really a beautiful city . Looking forward to hearing from you . ( I hope to hear from you soon). (我希望不久收到你的信。) (Take good care of yourself and write often) (多保重，常来信。) Do you have logical ideas (逻辑) and clear structure? Have you used some useful expressions and different sentence structures? * 人教课标 高一 必修 1 Unit 3 Unit 3 Travel Journal para1: 开门见山,写明自己此次写信来的目的(介绍自己的旅游经历) I’m writing to tell you about my trip to….. 对于非常正式的书信，开头句是很重要的。另外，信的内容中的每个段落 ，只能有一个中心思想，这样看信的人可以清楚、明白你所要表达的内容。为了表达的清楚，还要尽可能地用短句，少用长句、难句。段落也宜短不宜长，尤其开头和结尾两段更应简短。 Take good