高三复习作文讲评.pptVIP

Assessment 1. Structure 2. Content 3. Language ①When they are chatting, they don’t care about their writing. When chatting, they attach little importance to their writing. ②Every day, they have much homework. They can’t remember the characters. They have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters. Thank you! * 高三复习写作讲评课 Assessment practice of Writing 高考的考试大纲中，语文作文“每错一个字扣一分，重复不计”的新规定，引起考生和家长的极大关注。请你就以下要点给某英语报社写一篇英语报道。（不必翻译新规定内容） … … 你的建议 有助于学生重视母语; 有助于学生提高母语水平; 新规定的影响 错别字普遍（电脑普及；作业量大） 问题及分析 The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they don’t care about their writting. There have many wrong characters in their compositions, too. Every day, they have many homework. They can’t remember the characters. The government has carried out a new policy. It will make people pay attention to Chinese. It will help students learn Chinese well. We don’t have much time. It’s high time that we took action. We can develop our country by improving our mother tongue first. How do you grade it（给分）? And why? Does each part have a topic sentence? If not, come up with one. Is the article divided into parts? If not, divide them. 1. structure ASSESSMENT Is everything to the point(切题)? Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details. 2. content Are there any mistakes? If yes, correct them. Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）? If no, use some. Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）? If no, replace some. Does the writer use any linking words? If not, add some. 3. Language Summary: paragraphs topic sentence details to the point 切题 advanced vocabulary sentence patterns linking words structure content language writing few/no mistake(s) Let’s try to improve the composition. The computer is more and more widely used. Young people like to chat on line. When they are chatting, they don’t care about their writing. There have many wrong characters in their composition