专题3 应用文写作 类型8 演讲稿.docVIP

类型8| 演讲稿 英语演讲稿实际上是属于一种特殊的说明文或议论文，其基本组成部分是： 1．开始时对听众的称呼语。　最常用的是ladies and gentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用fellow students，distinguished guests，Mr.chairman，honorable judges(评委)等等。 2．提出论题。由于演讲的时间限制，必须开门见山，提出论题。 3．论证。对提出的论题，不可主观地妄下结论，而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是要把道理讲清楚。 4．结论。结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。 5．结尾。结尾要简洁，不要拉拉扯扯，说个没完。最普通的结尾就是：Thank you very much for your attention.。 你校将举办“我为自己感到自豪”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇演讲稿，包括以下内容： 1．简单介绍自己的性格； 2．记述一件或几件自己引以为豪的事例； 3．自我认识。 注意：词数80左右。 [习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文 　　Good morning，ladies and gentlemen！ I am an easy-going and optimistic girl.Im not a top student ① and Im happy and full ② with confidence.Now Ill tell you why. As a child，I ③ show an interest in painting.With my parents support and encouragement，I have been practicing drawing with joy and ④ my painting makes progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class. I usually send nice postcards made by myself ⑤for my friends and relatives.They are glad to accept my gifts，⑥ I am proud of them. Im sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Lets be proud of ourselves！ Thank you. 1.避免词汇搭配错误 ②处with改为of ⑤处for改为to 2.杜绝语法错误 ①处and改为but ③处show改为showed ⑥处需要加并列连词and 3.规避中式英语 ④处为中式英语，应改为I make progress in my painting [自我提升]——向极优作文迈进 　　Good morning，ladies and gentlemen！ Here，① (在你前面站着的是一个随和、乐观的小女孩)．Im not a top student but Im happy and full of confidence.Now Ill tell you why. As a child，I showed a ② interest in painting.With my parents support and encouragement，I have been practicing drawing with joy and make progress every day.Now I am a designer for blackboard and wall newspapers of our class.③ ，I usually send nice postcards made by myself to my friends and relatives. They are glad to accept my gifts，④ I am proud. Im sure everyone is special and unique in the world.Lets be proud of ourselves！ Thank you. 1.高级词汇 在③处加过渡词Besides 2.高级句型 用倒装句式补全句①：in front of you stands a girl，easy-going and optimistic 在④处添加“介词＋关系代词”以构成定语从句of which 3.强烈的修辞意识 ②处在interest前面加表示程