高2008级英语书面表达专题讲座课件.pptVIP

* * * * 书面表达专题讲座 江苏省靖江高级中学 顾亚琴 — 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要 点。— 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。— 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运 用能力。— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文 结构紧 凑。— 完全达到预期的写作目的。 一、书面表达评分标准（第五档 21---25分） 二、影响书面表达得分的因素： 1. 语言表达出现 “大错误”及“小错误” “大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如： 1) When we crossed the crossroads, there are two persons standing there. 2) The doctor suggested him to give up smoking. There were a lot of girl students of our class took part in the sports meet. 4) Any mistake can’t escape his eye. “小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面（这种错误主要是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇所致），如： 1) The biscuit tastes delecious. Mother reminded me what I should take with me on the trip. The worker gave us a warmly welcome. 4) Now I’m going to give you a detail description of the room. 2. 要点有所遗漏 1. 彻底理解题意，看准答题要求。 2. 把内容要点列成提纲。 3. 重新检查一遍，确信无一遗漏。 4. 动笔开始写。 一定要注意： 3. 离题句太多 历年来书面表达词数都要求在80—120个词范围之内，按一般长度的句子计算，也就是十句左右，没有盲目发挥的余地。再者过度发挥浪费了时间，影响了成绩。所以必须注意，写作中不可乱加花样，只能在紧扣主题, 保证要点全面的前提下适当发挥，增加有限的相关细节。 4. 没有避开难点而错误使用不准确的结构 2) 家家有存款、余粮。 1) The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. Every family has more grain and money than they can use. 3) 看完了这本书, 我写了一些读后感。 I wrote something after reading this book. 5. 没有使用高级词汇和复杂句 6. 书写是否工整清晰在某种程度上也会影响答卷得分 She doesn’t like sports. We had to go home. She cares nothing for sports. What we had to do was go home. 三、怎样运用复杂结构： 1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) 2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) 3. 使用不定式 4. 使用过去分词 He is so kind that he can help me. (一般) He is so kind as to help me. (高级) She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) Followed by many students, she… . (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般) Once seen, it can … . (高级) 5. 使用v-ing形式 When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般) If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一般) On his arriving/ arriva