大学英语四级提纲式作文写作.ppt

提纲式命题作文 Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not? Your composition should be based on the outline given below. Your composition should be at least 120 words. 　　Outline: 　　1、有人赞成个人买车。 　　2、也有人持相反观点。 　　3、你的看法。 　　Should People Own Cars or Not?  Should People own Cars or not? Now having a car is more and more popular, so many familys want to buy a car. They think it’s useful. Some youngs think it’s cool, and many people think it’s convenent when they have a private car. They don’t need to wait the crowded bus/so they can go to work on time. It’s save the time. And they also can drive the car go wherever they want to . A family can have a travel togethter. It’s comfortable. In a word, they can improve the quality of their life with a car. Especially the increasing of private car can promote the economic. It can lead the development of many industries. It’s good for our country’s developing. 作文评分原则及标准 14分– 漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误。 11分—清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 8分—马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。 5分—糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。 2分—一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Praise, An Important Gift Some people think that critism can change one’s view of life. However, many people argue that praise is more important. In my opinion, praise is more profitable than critism. Praise is like fresh air, without it, our life will become uninteresting and inhappy. Giving praise does not cost the giver a lot, but, the receiver can learn much. There are many people who succeed at last with a praise, Take myself for example. Though it happened a long time ago, I remember it clearly. It was a sports meeting and I attend it. At first, I was very confident and thought I was the best of them, so I had no training. The truth was, during the race, many students left me behind. Then I want to give up and was frustrated. Fortu