[写作技巧点拨半开放作文.ppt

写作技巧点拨系列(十) 短文写作之(半)开放作文 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. (2012·湖北高考) 请根据以下提示, 并结合事例, 用英语写一篇短文。 You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it. 注意: ①无须写标题, 不得照抄英语提示语; ②除诗歌外, 文体不限; ③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; ④词数为120个左右。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【审题——抓准信息· 快速推断】 项　目 体　裁 话　题 时　态 人　称 结　论 ______________ __________________________________ ___________ ___________ _________ (半)开放性作文 你无法选择命运, 却可以尽可能去利用 你所拥有的 一般过去时 第一人称 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】 第1段: 讲述个人的遭遇 【信息】通过事例来证明选择权 【点拨】转化为第一人称, 引出自己熟悉的事例 【运用】(1)三年前我在决定命运的一次重要考试中失败, 成为 一名普通中学的学生。 Three years ago ________________________________and became _________________________________. I failed an important exam in my life a student in an ordinary middle school Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. (2)尽管在这个破旧的校园和设备简陋的教室里我感到失望, 但 我发现老师们耐心又体贴。 一般表达: Though I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. 高级表达: (变倒装语序) ___________________________________________________ _________________, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly- equipped classroom Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. (3)我决定好好利用它。 I decided to ________________. 第2段: 如何与命运抗争 make the best of it Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【信息】起作用的不是环境而是利用或改造环境的能力 【点拨】增加细节, 以使上下文呼应 【运用】(4)无论我什么时候遇到困难, 他们总是能帮我。 __