开导网友想家全解.ppt

你是李华，英国网友Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了他的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到焦虑。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信。要点如下： 1.表示理解并给与安慰; 2.提出建议并给出理由。 卷面整体美观： 整洁干净无涂划 用笔偏粗 字体倾斜，注意字母所占格位 行距，字距合适 要求： 字数：120-150 内容：按要点展开，有实际内容，不能空洞。 拓展部分不能与中心无关，必须有用。 合理分段，内容间有逻辑性，层次清楚。 语言有吸引力，展示很强功底。 使用合适的新颖单词短语； 合理使用句型结构。 (从句 / 强调 / 疑问 / 感叹 / 被动) 体现不足： 卷面：脏乱，显得态度敷衍。 字太细太小或太大。 字体倾斜方向反了。 行间距，字间距不合理。 字母格位分布不合理。 连笔现象严重，显得潦草。 乱涂乱划现象严重。 未分段，结构不清 未注意文体格式及内容要求 无关废话多，补充内容与主题无关 句式单一，表达无亮点，简单句堆砌 篇幅太长或太短 两个完整的句子只有一个逗号 基础知识薄弱 （单词短语用法不明） Hi, Linda, I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. I can well understand that you feel too homesick and anxious to get used to the new environment. After all, mot people will have the same feeling in this situation. But as far as I’m concerned, it’s no use feeling sorry but doing nothing. It’s taking effective measures that is urgent (紧急的，紧迫的) and beneficial (有益的). First and foremost, why not try making friends with Chinese people who can share your sorrows? Friends are a strong hand which gives you power and support when needed. In addition, you may as well develop your own hobbies and interests, which can enrich your life and drive away your anxiety. Furthermore, it’s also a good choice to take part in some clubs in order to bring you more happiness and help you in language study. Last but not least, believe that all these bad feelings will go away with time going by. I fully believe that following all these suggestions, you will get through the hardship of learning abroad alone. I’m looking forward to your good news! Best wishes! (157words) Yours, Li Hua