高一英语作文解析.pptVIP

高一英语作文 影响英语书面表达得分的几个因素： 1.是否灵活运用各种句型 2.是否使用高级词汇 3.结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅 4.语篇信息是否完整, 有无多余 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整 第一步：仔细审题 题材 3. 可能用到的单词 2. 增减信息 第二步：理清要点（增减；特别留意是否要写自己观点） 题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 参考词汇：东方明珠 the Pearl of the East， 鸦片战争 the Opium War 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 1.香港的地理位置、面积和人口。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。 1. Hong Kong is in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. 2.She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War by the then government. 3.In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. Her future is very beautiful. 第三步：译写单句 第四步：连句成篇 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 Hong Kong is in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as “the Pearl of the East”. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful. - 50 words 第五步：检查润色 用词灵活，句型多变，不要逐句翻译 Hong Kong is in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k㎡. Her population is more than 6 million. She is known as “the Pearl of the East”. Hong Kong whose area is 1,045k㎡ lies in the southeast of China with a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. 适当增加细节（留意题目要求） She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . In 1997, she returned to motherland. Her future is very beautiful. After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainl