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高考作文评分 作文评分的主要标准： 题目所要求的内容是否清楚、有效地表达出来；（10’） 语法、词汇、拼写和标点符号等使用的准确性、句子结构和用词的多样性；（10’） 文章段落及句子间组织结构的连贯性。（5’） 2008上海高考英语作文 Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：你是否会参加比赛你做出该决定的具体理由 A I was very glad to take part in group dancing competition. As a middle school student, Take an active part in school activity is necessary. As a school, orgined the activity is also necessary. And I think take part in group dancing can improve my courage, and make my life become colorful, and give me a chance to show myself. In addition, I am full of confidence by myself. I think I can do the best in my class. Although I didn’t learn the dancing, I can learn now. I am sure that I can learn it well. I think my class will win the group dancing competition because we are all united. I want to take part in group dancing competition and I can do what I can to learn how to dance. 134 B Our school will hold a group dancing competition next week. And now our monitor hopes hat all of us can join it. I think it for a moment. But at last I decide to join it. First, I think it is a good chance for me to do more communication with other persons. I can make more friends. Second, I think I can learn more about dancing. I like dancing very much. So I think it is the reason for me to join it. Third, I think it can give me more happy I can do what I like. But my some classmates think it will waste a lot of time, then I think we can do it as our free rime. We can relax at that time. In a word, I think it useful for me to join it. I can learn more. And I can do what I like. Such as making new friends, relaxing and so on. So I decide to join the group dancing competition. 171 C Our class will take part in the group dancing competition and the monitor wants us to take an active