英语译林版一轮课件：写作第14讲如何写话题类记叙文.pptxVIP

译林卷区版 英语第14讲 如何写话题类记叙文——巧记妙叙，难以忘记 一、魔法导航话题类记叙文要注意以下几点:第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述,先交代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发生的原因、发展经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙文通常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事情或自然、社会现象则用一般现在时。第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。二、常用句式(1)One morning/day.../Last week/Saturday.../On a winter day.../This morning.../It was June 20,2010.../On May 4,2010...(2)...was doing sth....when suddenly.../As soon as...+主句/When...+主句/Before I could...+主句(3)As/Because/Since+从句+主句(4)After some time.../After a while.../A few minutes later.../A moment later.../Then...(5)Some were doing...some were doing...and/while others were doing...(6)...just then.../At that moment.../Hardly had...when...(7)And.../So.../Therefore.../As a result.../For that...三、典题示例?真题在线(2014课标全国Ⅱ)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。　1.家庭;　2.工作;　3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.?????????审题谋篇文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主体时态一般将来时要点布局1.引题句:我经常想象未来的生活(已给出)。2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。3.要点或扩展句:?4. 结尾句:总结全文,紧扣主题,如我的生活将丰富多彩。?阅卷现场考场作文:I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.In ten years, I will have my own family, ①lead a happy life. As for my job, I will build up my own business. Not only will it ②helps me make a living, but it will also contribute to the development of the society. When I have free time, I will take ③regularly exercise and become a volunteer to help the elderly people. It is of great use to my life quality. In brief, I will spare no effort to make my future life meaning-ful. 文章提升:1.修改错误:1)lead如果作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应将①lead改为?。2)在not only引导的倒装句型中助动词will提前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps改为 ?。3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为?。2.提升建议:将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式:??。参考范文:I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different from what it is today in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope