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高中英语书面表达步步高讲练(续) http://www.DearEDU.com 6. 选词或搭配不当 [误]Peter is a warm-hearted person, so everybody likes to have friends with him. [正]Peter is a warm-hearted person, so everybody lies to make friends with him. [析]在理解英语词汇时，不能仅停留在了解其字面意义上，而应掌握内在涵义。同时要熟悉它们的习惯搭配。平时学习词汇时，要仔细思考，勤查词典，尤其要多记英语解释，弄清它们的确切意思和用法，以免造成类似错误。 [巩固练习] 1) It only spends us 15 minutes to go to the park from the center of the city by bus. 2) I hope you to become a lawyer. 3) Mr Wang forgot his wallet in the classroom yesterday. 4) She will remember firmly what her teacher said and did. 5) Can you borrow me your dictionary? 6) I must keep your words in mind and work hard to raise my English. 7) John caught a bad cold, so he had to live in hospital. 8) I saw an animal this afternoon. [答案] 1)spends→takes/ →We spend 15 minutes going to the park from the center of the city by bus. 2)→I hope that you will become a lawyer./ I wish you to become a lawyer. 3)forgot→left “遗忘某物在某处”不可用forget，应用leave 4)firmly→clearly 汉语中可以讲“牢牢记住”，但英语中firmly却不可与remember搭配。常和remember搭配的副词有clearly，perfectly，thoroughly等 5)borrow→lend 6) raise→improve 7)live→stay live表示“在某处居住”，病人“住院”用stay 8)此句应该用具体词却误用了概括词，应将animal改为lion，tiger等 7. 逻辑错误 [误]Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl; she will be successful in anything she tries. [正]As she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries. [析]“一个心地善良的人能保证事事都能成功”这个推理不合理。“一个具有坚强意志和信念的人可能会取得成功”这才合乎逻辑。在写作时，不少学生从语言角度考虑得多，而从逻辑角度考虑得少。因此，常常出现不少逻辑错误。 [巩固练习] 1) Americans are tall. 2) Every bird can fly. 3) She must be ill because I saw a doctor going into her room. 4) When I was going out, it began to rain. 5) The armymen had been marching all day and their uniforms were green. 6) I was born and grew up in the town of Yidu in 1953. [答案] 1)→Many Americans are tall. 2)→Most of the birds can fly. 3)→She must be ill, for I saw a doctor going into her room. because表直接原因，表示的原因和产生的结果有必然的因果关系。原句意思是：她生病是因为医生走进了她的房间。这是不合逻辑的。改成for引起的分句是对前句作推测性解释。 4)→I was going out when it beg