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The Exam-Oriented Education Or The Quality-Oriented Education There is a widespread concern over the issue that which of the exam-oriented education and quality-oriented education is better. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A number of people agree that the exam-oriented education is better. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, it is of great heap for students to acquire knowledge. Furthermore, in the second place, it can encourage students to be eager to learn. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that the quality-oriented education is better, which will not force students to bear great pressure but can give priority to what they love. As far as I am concerned, the latter opinion holds more weight. The reasons are obvious. For one thing, the quality-oriented education provides students with the chance of all-round development. For another, only educated in this pattern can students enjoying their interests are motivated to their work and life, even the world. 字段评: 1.1 There is a widespread concern over the issue that which of the exam-oriented education and quality-oriented education is better. [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: affair, business, matter, concern, thing 均含“事情”之意。 affair: 含义较广，侧重指已发生或必须去做的任何事情或事务。复数形式多指重大或较复杂的事务。business: 通常指较重要或较难而又必须承担的事情，也可指商事。matter: 普通用词，着重指一件考虑中的或需要处理的事。concern: 往往强调与个人或团体利害有直接或重大关系的事。thing: 用作“事情”解时，词义较笼统、含糊，多用于指不很具体的事。 好评报错 1.2 But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. [教师点评] [搭配统计] 动名搭配 concern...topic 在教材中出现过 15 次 SeeAlso: concern issue160,concern matter94,touch topic21,concern subject10,relate topic7,interest topic6 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: hot, warm, burning 都有“热的”之意。 hot: 最普通用词，指温度很高，往往有灼热、滚烫含义。warm: 通常指温度不太高，介于hot与cold之间，不太热也不太凉，给人以舒适感。burning: 暗示热源是火，多用于夸张，指像火烧一样热。 好评报错 [批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击 好评报错 [高分短语] varies from p