英语写作专题辅导课件-概要写作分析.ppt

* * * * * * * * * * * 我们建议, 读写任务的[写作内容] 2的3个要点,每个要点单独一个自然段, 依次分三个自然段。每个自然段段首写一个主题句, 然后再围绕这个主题句展开。写主题句的方法主要有以下几种： 是问句或含“是否”的句子, 可直接回答, 作为主题句。如： 1. 直接回答 (1) 你是否赞成“熄灯一小时”(Earth Hour)活动(2011深圳二模) I am strongly for this activity.我十分赞成这种活动。 (2) 你从故事中学到了什么道理(2009广州二模) This story teaches us that we should not judge people or things only by their appearance. (1) 中学生活和大学生活的差别(2008广东) From my point of view, college life will be different from the life in high school. (2) 休假学年(a gap year)的好处(2011佛山二模) The advantages of taking a gap year are obvious. 2. 复述内容 (3) 建设绿色校园的重要性(2011东山中学) It is of great importance to build a green campus. (4) 你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施？(2011东山中学) In order to build a green campus, effective measures should be taken. (1)你对考试作弊的看法(2011揭阳二模) In my opinion, cheating in exams will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ study habit. 3. 明示观点 (2) 你对留堂制度的看法 (2011佛山一模) In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students. (3) 你对失败的看法或态度 (2009汕头一模) In my opinion, we should take an active attitude towards failure. 你或你同学的留堂经历(2011佛山一模) This reminds me of my friend Li Hua’s experience in primary school. 4. 引出经历 (1) 你读这篇演讲稿后的感受(2011广州一模) After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student... (2) 你读完这个故事(目标的重要性)的感受(2010揭阳二模) I was deeply inspired by such a story... 5. 说出感受 在写好主题句之后, 我们还要通过各种方式展开主题, 使文章饱满, 有血有肉。展开的主要方式有： 1.说明原因 (1) 你读完这个故事(目标的重要性)的感受(2010揭阳二模) (感受)I was deeply inspired by such a story, (原因) as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping one’s success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships I am to go through. (2) 你对失败的看法或态度(2009汕头一模) (态度)In my opinion, we should take an active attitude towards failure(原因) because most of us experience the failure though few of us are so lucky as to succeed. 你认为父母是否该对孩子养成良好习惯负责(2007潮州二模) (观点)As far as I am concerned, parents should be responsible for helping child