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书面表达 初中英语作文要求学生在20分钟内写出80个词左右的短文，并且质量高，内容全，形式正确。第一档17—20分涵盖所有的内容要点，运用了较为丰富的词汇，语法和句式结构，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，且表达清楚，书写规范。第二档13—16分 涵盖主要内容，语法结构和词汇基本正确，虽有少数错误，但不影响理解，且书写规范。第三档9—12分涵盖基本内容，但句子不太连贯，语法错误较多。第四档4—8分 能围绕话题写出几个简单的句子。第五档0—3分不写或抄写与话题无关的内容不得分，若能写出一些与话题有关的词或短语给1---3分 一、写作体裁划分： 记叙文：（写人或写事）记叙人的文章要注意人物的肖像描写、语言描写、行动描写、心理描写以及细节描写。记事的记叙文主要是交代事情的发展变化过程。应注意要素：人物，时间，地点，事件的起因、经过和结果即五个w (who , when , where , what , why ) 和一个how.记叙文常用的句型：1. She is good at…/ does well in….2. She is interested in …3. She likes / enjoys ….4. His favorite subject / sport is….5. We met at the school gate at eight o’clock in the morning . 6. We went to ….by bike / bus . 7. We set off / out to climb the hill at six in the morning . 8. Somebody was doing…. When… I was walking by the lake when I saw a man fall off the bicycle . 9. I still remember the day…. I still remember the day when I failed my Chinese exam .10. I’ll never forget…I’ll never forget my English teater who has given me his understanding and love . 11. as soon as we got there , we…一到那里 ，我们就…As soon as we got there , we started to help the farmers with their farmwork . 12. What surprised / attracted us most was that … 最使我们吃惊的是 / 最吸引我们的是···What attracted us most was that the water there was so clear .13. Although we were tired , we were happy / we enjoyed ourselves today . 14. what a terrible / happpy day ! 说明文：写作注意顺序：依据信息来动笔，时间、空间、和逻辑，三种顺序选其一。时间顺序是指时间上从先到后的顺序；空间顺序是指从整体到局部，从上到下，从内到外的顺序；逻辑顺序是指先因后果或先果后因或先主后次的顺序。1、顺序说明法: These are several reasons why I decided to study in this middle school . First of all , the students in this school are friendly . Secondly, there is a big library and 3 big computer rooms . Thirdly , there are many finest teachers . Finally , this school is not far from my home . It won’t take me long time to go to school . 这段文字介绍了一个学生在这个学校学习的理由。全段层次分明，连接词（first of all , secondly , thirdly , finally ）运用得体。2、举例说明: Computers are very important in our lives . For example , they can do many kinds of work . You can get lots of informa