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英语二写作课堂笔记 一、写作总论 1写作的重要性 2准备时间及规划（64hrs） 大作文——用真题和模拟题 小作文——用真题（一、二） 3做题速度（30min+15min） 4 FAQ 文章需要体现深度？ 模板可不可以有？ 押题靠谱吗？ 基础不好就不有得高分的可能？ 怎样得高分？ 评分标准： 1.包含所有内容要点 2.使用丰富的语法结构和词汇 3.语言自然流畅，基本上没有语法错误 （语言） 4. 有效地采用了多种衔接手段（结构） 二、写作基本功 1词汇和短语篇 重复啰嗦 It is really a big problem to undergraduates because undergraduates are about to graduate from their colleges and do not have much work experience because those undergraduates have spent much time in their colleges. Besides, it is hard for undergraduates, whose colleges are not famous, to find a good job after they graduate from their colleges. Tips：同近义词的替换（P7） people/ individual/ person/ character friends/ folks/ guys/ fellows advantage/ virtue/ strength/ edge disadvantage/ weak point/ defect/ weakness relationship/ tie/ pull strings/ social connections/ network relationship neck tie, be tied to e.g. 1 relationship/ tie/ pull strings/ social connections/ network 李华，是学生会会长(the chair person of Student Union )，他认识当地环保部门(environmental organization)的主管(director )。我们可以依靠(count on/ rely on/depend on )李华,因为他能找一些关系(be tied to )，获得环保部门领导对我们的环保活动的支持。 Li Hua, the Chairman of Student Union, is tied to the director of the local environmental organization. We could count on him because he would be able to pull some strings(找关系) to gain support from local officials on our activities of environmental conservation（conversation ）. 有些刚刚毕业的大学生缺乏(lack/lack in)社会经验(social experience )，人际交往能力(interpersonal skills)和社会关系(social connections)，这让他们很难在应聘中取得明显(obvious)的优势(advantage/ disadvantage/weakness, weak point)。他们真的需要立即去学习如何与别人交往了(deal with/ network v)。 A certain number of brand-new( fresh ) graduates lack social experience, interpersonal skills or social connections. Therefore, it is hard for them to gain competitive edge in job interview. They really need to learn how to network right now. (2) 词汇误用 e.g. 1 because of + N In China, because of its tradition, the elderly (old) are mostly supported by their childre