五年级英语作文带翻译.doc

五年级英语作文带翻译 小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Wang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is short and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hairs are long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Friday. I have an English class on Friday. I have a PE class on Tuesday. I usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is?Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It?s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. I like ice-creams, too. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What?s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. I’mhelpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 In The Kitchen This is the kitc